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The Wasteland

Planet Earth is dead.
The Biospheres are pristine,
bright recollections.

He breaks ships for cash
but has never flown above
the smog and rusting.

They revolve like moons
with a hundred white faces.
Billions look up.


The Garden of Eden

"Let's feed the Earthlings,"
cries a human. She wonders
at speciation.

Extinct flowers bloom.
The day cycle ends and she
watches the dome split.

The constellations
were renamed by the Founders.
She finds Orion.


The Dark Star

He collects spare parts,
amasses a ship in months,
then learns to pilot.

"There's no need for a
license to kill, kill, kill, kill,
the unfortunate."

She sees him coming,
but says nothing. The glass
erupts to soundless.


Oblivion

They watch from the ground
and color televisions.
Some cheer. Some sicken.

"And measures have been
taken to ensure no more
Spheres will be damaged."

The borders tighten.
Someone starves in Coal City.
Planet Earth is dead.
scifaikus! i decided to try my hand at it!
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
i think this is either the third or fourth scifaiku i've read and really enjoyed 
(i'm not much of a fan of em you see, though i really am a fan of you no doubt :heart:)
congratulations on the DLD, dearling
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:iconglossolalias:
glossolalias Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
thank you :heart:
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:icondoughboycafe:
doughboycafe Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Professional Writer
Im really impressed at how much story was told in so few words. The whole history of the world unfolded for me when I read it, and its only what, 20 or so lines long? Fabulous.
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:iconglossolalias:
glossolalias Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
thank you!
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I'm Jasmine, a staff blogger from :iconpoeticalcondition:. Just to let you know I've featured your piece in this journal: poeticalcondition.deviantart.c…
It's a round-up of all of our members who have received a DLD or DD over the past 9 days, so please do check it out!
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:iconglossolalias:
glossolalias Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
:heart: thank you!
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:iconmadameshadowenn:
madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :rose:
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:iconlancelotprice:
LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013

It's always open season with no fee for attacking the differentfromus/me.



Trigonometry has proven to be nearly the most useful to me part of mathematics, even spherical trigonometry. Simple algebra accounts for the rest.

Quadratic equations must be the most useless thing ever invented. A dull toy.

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glossolalias Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
haha i hate trig. i prefer calc. based mathematics myself, especially in regards to physics. more applications.
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
:) I prefer calculator based [< lol] maths. Especially HP's RPN calculators.
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