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where the scenes
blend too seamlessly
to the next glance:
our twoselves soon rising
up-through white fibers—

de-emulsified—

from the thick of reality:
oilslicks slipping up-along
formless nows—

half-
remembered
when later looking back: the lost
incompatible with water but—

we sought fewer thoughts
and pacing.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like that first stanza.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
thank you!
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
My favorite poems are the ones I've drafted while high...
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
same.
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vespera Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Psh, don't write sober.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
i was waiting for this comment.
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i know ;) you just couldn't wait for me to drop in and be a bad influence.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
;)
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Gravenguilt Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Keep writing while you're high!
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
hahaha ;)
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