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i.

we landed in oklahoma
and drank cheap martinis in the terminal;
you carried my guitar and fell in love
with my voice but not my tongue,
not my hands.


ii.

there's a man with a garage
that looks like a plane because nothing
meant more to him. will you make a model
of that bar? will you make a model
of my red cheeks? or will you live in a townhome
with her and three children?


iii.

the problem was you're not gay.
the problem was there was feeling
but it wasn't for us. i had you but
it wasn't for us.


iv.

i'm not sure if i resent you,
but i remember that bar and every pockmark
on the stool you sat on while i played
the song that parted your lips;
you remember every pockmark in oklahoma
like they were ours.
inspired by [link] for :iconohsparrowsong:'s version of the game i ran x) go check out hers here. [link]

very beautiful song :heart:
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-03-09
terminal by *glossolalias reminds the suggester "of that contemporary voice of conversation" found in modern poetry.

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tigabelle Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
This is absolutely stunning work, Congrats on the daily deviation! :eager::heart::squee:
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:iconecholalic-ellie:
Echolalic-Ellie Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely little piece you have here, darling. :heart:
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
thank you! i'm still surprised it got a DD every time i look back at it.
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:iconecholalic-ellie:
Echolalic-Ellie Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A lovely surprise, I'm sure. Hug 
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional Writer
you're part of "some clear tropisms for your frozen lines" here [link] :rose:
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
:heart:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats, Jorge!
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
thanks rachel :heart:
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
A wonderful piece, Jorge, which I find is more stunning than the song that inspired it. Congratulations! <3
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
thank you! it's a good song, so that's a hefty compliment.
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